Showing posts with label screenplay. Show all posts
Showing posts with label screenplay. Show all posts

Friday, August 13, 2010

20100813 Lucky Day

"It is written, so shall it be done."


ROAD KILL script has been entered into two screenplay contests just this morning.




Janice and I met on a Friday the Thirteenth almost 18 years ago, so we consider those our lucky days. I hope it grants me readers who are not too jaded or overworked to appreciate my script.


Give my work a fair shake, and I feel I've got a good shot at least the semi-finalists spots.  We all have our dreams...


Mark E. Poole

Thursday, August 12, 2010

20100812 Horse Races


If you are independently wealthy, or doing a micro-budget film, you can produce your screenplays without additional funds from an outside source. I am not the former, and the latter almost caused me to go bankrupt.
So for my next film, I vowed (to myself & Janice) that I would find the money before I even started pre-production.  To do that, I wanted to write a story in the vein of the Coen Brothers ( who’s quirky films I have admired since their first in 1984, BLOOD SIMPLE.  They interject their films with a wry bit of dark humor, and they are a fun romp all –around.
So I wanted to write a simple script that had that feel. By the time I was finished, I sink a Cadillac in a creek, blow up three more cars, knock the windows out of a small downtown, and destroy a bridge. Toss in a car chase, an actress tossed about in a moving truck bed, and dangling off the side of a bridge. So now I’ve got myself a load of stunts and practical effect elements that takes it into a big budget. Silly me.
As a director with one low-budget film under his belt, it is hard to attract money to something as chancy as movie-making, especially in this economy. So I have to resort to some other means.
I am talking marketing.
The novelization of the script helped me resolve some issues, but it also allows me a way to generate audience interest in the film. I am also entering the script into screenplay contests.
I am choosing the contests carefully:
From their site:
The Expo Screenplay Competition is one of the industry's most prestigious screenplay contests.  Since its inception, it has offered some of the biggest cash prizes of any screenplay competition in the world.  The Grand Prize includes $20,000 plus a publicity campaign and multiple forms of access to the industry.  In all, the contest offers more than $33,000 in cash prizes.

However, the cash prizes have always been merely part -- and, we believe, the lesser part -- of the prizes and benefits this contest offers  From its inception, the  contest focused on giving its winners publicity, visibility, and prominence. We call these services the ACCESS PRIZES.  The strongest focus of ths contest is on access to  the industry --  getting winners' and seminalists' names and scripts past the gatekeepers to the movers and shakers who turn scripts  into movies and TV shows.


From their site:
The contest's aim is to seek out and encourage compelling film narratives, and to introduce the next generation of great screenwriters to today's leading production companies and agencies.
The winner and top-ten finalists will be considered for representation by William Morris Independent, CAA, The Gersh Agency, Exile Entertainment, ICM, Oasis Media, UTA, The Radmin Company, Energy Entertainment, Dontanville/Frattaroli, and The Firm.
Their scripts will be considered for film option and development by leading production companies, including: American Zoetrope, Samuel Goldwyn Films, Fox Searchlight, Sony Pictures Classics, IFC Entertainment, Paramount Classics, Lionsgate, Icon Pictures, Working Title, Dimension Films, Frelaine, Michael London Productions, Number 9 Films, Next Films, Pretty Pictures, This Is That, Roserock Films, Benderspink, Astrakan Films, Industry Entertainment, Nine Yards Entertainment, Anonymous Content, Jim Wedaa Productions, Robert Evans Company, Fortis Films, Jean Doumanian Productions, FX, and Ziskin Productions.

I encourage you to follow the links to learn more.
These both have deadlines that are fast approaching, and I will enter them after one last read-through.
So it’s a big step, going up against possibly thousands of other scripts. I think I’ve got a good, tight script with punchy dialog, engaging characters, and a satisfying conclusion.
By doing this, and hopefully placing well, it will lend credibility to the quality of the work. This could also generate the level of interest required to generate the funding to make my film.


I have a two year plan to get everything in place to make ROAD KILL a reality. So this is the beginning of a series of horse races to get a shot at the big prize, the realization of my story.

Mark E. Poole

Friday, August 6, 2010

20100806 No Rest for the Wicked

Community

Went to Fright Night Film Fest last weekend in Louisville. It was great to reconnect with my friends in the KY film community, and meet some new ones. 

They had many films playing that I had to duck out of. Just no time to sit through a full movie for one reason (got to talk to my friends about their projects), the other was that the majority were unwatchable.

Someone asked what movies I would be watching. I told him, “Directors don’t watch movies, we criticize them.” I know that sounds arrogant, but it’s also a curse. After making a movie, it’s almost impossible to enjoy another without picking it apart. And then there are some that aren’t worth the effort. If the filmmaker doesn’t care enough about his craft to learn some basics about story, lighting, or sound, I feel no reason to spend my time on it.

I am not being mean, I am trying to help. I sat down with a very earnest director after one screening and gave him a few pointers because he has some real potential. He’s got a good thing going and he knows he has some challenges to surmount.

So if you are planning to make a film, and want some free advice, here are some basic points to keep in mind:

Lighting

Most lacked sufficient lighting for proper registration, flat, featureless lighting, or shot actors in front of bright outside windows. 

Just because your camera can capture an image in low light, doesn’t give you the excuse to ignore proper lighting.  It just comes out looking muddy, or blown out.

If you cannot afford a full light kit, the basic item is a China Ball, which will set you back a whopping $5. It’s a 200 watt light in a paper lantern. What it provides is a nice soft light that can wrap around your actors faces. Should not be your sole lighting source, but many of the productions I saw could benefit from this addition.

Move your talent out from in front of windows on a sunny day, unless you front light them to match, or want it to look like shit.

Sound

Get an off camera mike. Pay attention to any noise in the area. Compressors, dryers, AC, anything. If that’s out of your control to turn them off, then do ADR. Cranking up some music to try to hide it will just trample over your dialog. ADR is a fact of life even on big-budget films.

Foley is your friend.

Story

Too much to go into detail about, but damn, there were so many crappy stories out there. Retreads of retreads. I saw maybe two novel ideas, only to be disappointed because it took 20 minutes to get to what should have been the 5 minute mark.

You have to wonder if the films even had a script, because they sure as hell haven’t read any books on scriptwriting. A good one is How to write a movie in 21 Days  Viki King. At a bare minimum, you need to read SAVE THE CAT by the late Blake Synder. If you follow his guidelines, you’ll at least have some structure to the piece. I am not advocating a slavish devotion, but at least have a good reason to deviate from it, besides ignorance.

And one last thing – cut the crap!  What I mean by that is we do not go to movies to see the mundane minutiae that makes up our daily lives. We do not need to see people walking, talking, driving, or sitting, unless there is something else connected to it that advances the story.

The only time watching someone just drive was hip was in 1984 when MIAMI VICE overlaid footage of Don Johnson driving around Miami in a Ferrari with Phil Collins’ In The Air Tonight. So that’s it. We are so done with that. You don’t need to show your character driving from one location to another, unless they are getting serviced while driving or something INTERESTING.

Screenplay Competition

I mention this because many scenes in ROAD KILL have people driving. But I have those only to reinforce the overall theme, and move the story along. They are not on grocery runs; they hit potholes, wreck, get blown up, receive blowjobs, etc.  These car scenes move the story forward.

I am entering the ROAD KILL screenplay into the 2010 Expo Screenplay Competition. I have high hopes for this. I reached 3rd in last year’s online short competition, so I hope to pit my script against the heavy-hitters in this year’s completion.
Wish me luck!



Monday, July 12, 2010

20100712 Introduction to the ROAD KILL Blog




This blog is all things ROAD KILL, the movie script, novel, and attempts to get both sold, published, and produced.

ROAD KILL is a mystery thriller about how a small-town Sheriff deals with a series of brutal killings in rural Virginia. Jax Hayes is struggling to win re-election in this climate of change, only to have bodies start stacking up in the morgue. He’s a man of action, dry wit, and simple tastes, going up against a longtime rival who is attempting to cement his monopoly on the state highway construction business.

The tale is told in the style of one of my favorite writers, the late Robert Parker. His Jesse Stone series and others inspired me to tell my stories stripped down to the bare essentials, great characters, action, and wry conversations.

ROAD KILL actually began life as a screenplay, which I adapted to a novel. That’s backwards. I’ll go into that with the blog.
The novel is complete. After I get some things tweaked, I’ll be publishing it. I’ll go into how that’s done here. It’s my first time, so we can share the journey.
Keep checking back, and if you like it, click the Follow button on the page.

Thanks!

Mark E. Poole